shoga jira

I hope someday Philippine education system would  //will// be on of the leading examples of educational systems in the world. I'm an Englidh teacher in our locality, //and// although I'm still a fresh graduate and a newbee in this profession I already have a view of what's the real score //is// in the educational system of the country. As of the moment I am sitting here in the computer laboratory of the school taking a break from what the school demands. The demand of making a UbD inspired Unit plan. It is not just me who finds the work difficult but most of my colleagues, even those who had a lot of seminars regarding this new thing wrinkled their brows and nose upon making such //at having to do such a thing [OR] upon being assigned such a task//. I hope things can be clearer this time. I hope fora better guidance on this matter and I hope for a better change on the system of education in the Philippines.

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Pretty nice.

"A break from what the school demands" is OK grammar, but it is unusual usage. More typical would be "a break from the demands of the job" or "a break from the work the school requires of us."