I didn't know why.
Yesterday,I was in a bad mood.Though,I couldn't say because of what.I tried to calm down.But that was no use.I didn't want to watch TV,read,go online,even talk.I didn't want to make my husband unhappy.When he asked me a few questions I tried to open my mouth to say a few words.I thought,that's too bad.Then sat on the sofa,I tried to find out the reasons.I found out nothing.
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I didn't know why.
Yesterday,I was in a bad mood, though I couldn't say because of what. I tried to calm down, but that was no use. I didn't want to watch TV, read, go on line or even talk. I didn't want to make my husband unhappy. When he asked me a few questions, I tried to open my mouth to say a few words. I thought,that's too bad. Then I sat on the sofa and I tried to find out the reasons. I found out nothing.
[Good work. The two clauses were subordinate, ('though' and 'but') and should be connected as part of one sentence.]
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Thanks Prons.
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Maybe just because you got your period.I know many girls feel unhappy with they got period.
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Women always have problems :P
I didn't see any problems in your writing though, good job.
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