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What I am about to do. I'm excited, I'm going to my home tonight. I live in México D.F but I was born in a little town which I'm coming back at midnight. The last semester I didn't go for all that one, this semester I'm going because the Easter Holidays, so I'm staying there a week and then I'm coming back here again, over there I have all my family, where I live in México I'm by my own. I'm gonna help my father in his farm which is supposed to have a lot of work, it's different kind of work compared with the one that I do here because is physical work and here it's mental work, well that's what he says. But also I have a lot of homework wich must be done by the end of the week. But I want to relax, here is a lot of stress because of the exams and the rush of the life in the city, over there all is peace, stay with the nature and the non-concerned people with do all the things as fast as possible will make me feel better, I hope so. Greetings!

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What I am about to do.

I'm excited, I'm going to my home tonight. I live in México D.F but I was born in a little town which I'm coming back to at midnight. The last semester I didn't go for all that one home at all, this semester I'm going back because for the Easter Holidays, so I'm staying there a week and then I'm coming back here again, over there I have all my family my whole family is over there, where I live in México I'm by on my own. I'm gonna help my father in his farm which is supposed to have be a lot of work, it's a different kind of work compared with the one that what I do here because it's physical work and here it's mental work, well that's what he says. But also I have a lot of homework wich must be done by the end of the week. But I want to relax, here is I'm under a lot of stress because of the exams and the rush of the life in the city, over there all is peace, staying with the nature and the non-concerned avoiding people with who do all the things everything as fast as possible will make me feel better, I hope so hopefully. Greetings! Regards!

 

This is good, Rodolfo! I just made some minor corrections relating to grammar and the use of prepositions. One overall point: you have a lot of run-on sentences; your writing would be clearer if you kept them shorter and tried to express a single idea in each sentence.

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