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What I am about to do.
I'm excited, I'm going to my home tonight. I live in México D.F but I was born in a little town which I'm coming back to at midnight. The last semester I didn't go for all that one home at all, this semester I'm going back because for the Easter Holidays, so I'm staying there a week and then I'm coming back here again, over there I have all my family my whole family is over there, where I live in México I'm by on my own. I'm gonna help my father in his farm which is supposed to have be a lot of work, it's a different kind of work compared with the one that what I do here because it's physical work and here it's mental work, well that's what he says. But also I have a lot of homework wich must be done by the end of the week. But I want to relax, here is I'm under a lot of stress because of the exams and the rush of the life in the city, over there all is peace, staying with the nature and the non-concerned avoiding people with who do all the things everything as fast as possible will make me feel better, I hope so hopefully. Greetings! Regards!
This is good, Rodolfo! I just made some minor corrections relating to grammar and the use of prepositions. One overall point: you have a lot of run-on sentences; your writing would be clearer if you kept them shorter and tried to express a single idea in each sentence.
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