Admissions Essay part1 ~ pleas help me with corrections :) Being a fashion designer is a very enviable career, which can creating fabulous dresses and watching people wearing the clothing they designed. I would like to do things like that in my future, but I would rather call that an artist. I grew up in a home where full of love. since I was 3, my mom let me learn lots of thing, such as percussion, piano, violin, panting, even writing. She wants me to find out what I want by myself. I am the type of person who pays attention to dressing and image. I dress up every time I go out, even when I put the garbage out. High school students in Taiwan must wear uniforms but our school has a provision that if our class is very orderly, we are permitted to wear civilian clothes to school one day a week. It is a great day when I can wear my ordinary clothes. I try to match my clothes with the intention of receiving praise from my classmates. On the way to school is just like walking on the catwalk. I want the attract the attention of others, even if I dress oddly. Sometimes, my own clothes just can’t meet me, and there are so many great ideas full of my head, then I will put them on canvas. Since then, the seed named dream quietly bud. No one ever told me about fashion and how these fabulous dresses came from. Maybe it’s because of my ignorance or the conservative education in Taiwan, I used to thought, when I grow up, my job will be either sit in front of a desk doing paper work or being a teacher. Until the first time I watch <gossip girl>, I finally found what I want in my future. “ yeah, that’s it ! That’s exactly what I want to do !! “ I yelled, when Jenny Humphrey was making clothes for her own fashion show. I started taking classes of pattern making and sewing, The more I have learn, the more I understand that I need to go outside my world, see how is fashion going on with other culture. January,2013. I immigrated to the United States. I have visited a lot of school already. When I came to (school name), I know this is it. (school name) is a place where have well study environment and adequate study materials ; where people would struggle to increase knowledge and feel free to create. there is more..................