Hello, I'm Korean. 

My name is Jini.
In the Korean age, I would be 35years old.
I would like to learn English.
I'm looking for my English adviser.

This is in full sentences if you want to put everything together ->

Hello, my name is Jini and I'm Korean. I'm the Korean age, I would be 35 years old. I would like to learn english so I am looking for my English adviser.

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Hi Jinji, nice to meet you! My name is Joanna! -bow- I hope you can find your English adviser very soon, there are many great people around here. Please enjoy and have a nice day! 

I want to learn English.

Hello. I'm Korean.
My name is Jini. I live in Korea  (age,) and I'm 35 years old.
I would like to learn English.
I'm looking for my (an) English adviser(s). >>> use "an" OR "s" :)

I want to learn English.

hello.im korean.
my name is jini.
I was born in korea and I am 35 years old.
i would like to learn english.
im looking for my English adviser.

Hi Jini, my name is Uri Quintal. I am an ESL and Spanish teacher graduated from the Arizona State University in The United States. I noticed some mistakes that you did with your English grammar and I corrected them using red. I offer some basic lessons for non-native English speakers in order to help students not only to speak another language but to think and dream in another language for a very cheap price. Please feel free to contact me if you are interested. Have a nice day! :)