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Arthur
And again snow.. We all have thought summer has come, aren't we? But no such luck. Snow fell again. Somewhere someone's walking in shorts, but you should put on a warm jacket and hat. Where are you, a hot sun?
12 mag 2013 08:18
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And again snow..

Snow again...

 

We all have thought summer has come, aren't we?

We all thought summer had come, didn't we?

 

But no such luck. Snow fell again.

<em>(Awesome.  I would probably have put an ellipsis between the two sentences, but that is just a style choice. But no such luck... snow fell again.)</em>

 

Somewhere someone's walking in shorts, but you should put on a warm jacket and hat.

<em>(I think there maybe should be a comma after somewhere: Somewhere, someone's walking..., but I'm not actually sure - punctuation can be hard even for native speakers haha.  This sentence is very good though.  You could try also: Maybe, somewhere, someone's walking in shorts, but you should put on a warm jacket and hat.  This is saying that while it may be warm somewhere else, right here it is cold so you should dress up.)</em>

 

Where are you, a hot sun?

Where are you, hot sun?

 

I hope that summer hears your call and comes soon!

19 maggio 2013
I am in South of China, it's really hot today. Can't believe there's snow somewhere.
12 maggio 2013
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