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My firs entry This is my first entry here, I'll try to introduce myself a little bit but I've been always very bad on it. My name is Lydia and I'm a 28 years old woman, I've been living in Alcala de Henares for 10 years. I'm from Zaragoza and I don't know where I'm going to end, where the job bring me. I'm currently unemployed so I'm trying to use my free time improving my english and starting to learn Japanesse (I only know a few words of it, not enough to speak, write or read). In my free time I like reading (my favorite author is Terry Pratchett, the Moist Von Lipwig serie is the best) and crafting (croche and newspaper stuff mostly). Now I'm on a diet, I been always very lazy about it, and trying to exercise myself a litte more (bikini operation, yeah). I love cooking, specially desserts, and I need to struggle a lot with myself for not doing it this days and ruin all my effort. What's your favorite recipe? Mine is probably tiramisu, I enjoy a lot cooking it or maybe brownie, it took a lot of time learning to cook it properly. At the beginning it always turned into chocolate cake (a very dry one).

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Hi Lydia. This is a nice piece of writing. You communicate everything very well, and parts of it were quite amusing. Just a few things to correct. I have also amended some of the punctuation - don't worry too much about this. It's up to you how you organise your ideas. Parts of it, such as at the end, where you talk about your favourite dishes, have a nice flow (you write as you speak!) and I did not enjoy breaking it up with full stops. All in all, very well done!

 

My first entry

This is my first entry here. I'll try to introduce myself a little bit but I've been always very bad at it.

My name is Lydia and I'm a 28 year old woman. I've been living in Alcala de Henares for 10 years. I'm from Zaragoza and I don't know where I'm going to end up, wherever my job brings me. I'm currently unemployed so I'm trying to use my free time improving my English and starting to learn Japanese (I only know a few words of it, not enough to speak, write or read). In my free time I like reading (my favorite author is Terry Pratchett - the Moist Von Lipwig serie is the best) and crafting (crochet and newspaper stuff mostly).

Now I'm on a diet (I have always been very lazy about it) and trying to exercise myself a litte more (that's right - operation bikini). I love cooking, especially desserts, and I need to struggle a lot with myself to avoid doing it these days and ruin all my effort. What's your favorite recipe? Mine is probably tiramisu. I enjoy cooking it a lot. Or maybe brownies. They took a lot of time to learn to cook it properly. At the beginning they always turned into a chocolate cake (a very dry one).

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