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Hamid
Last vacations I love traveling. I enjoy searching places, things to do, knowing new bills and coins. My last travel was to Cuba. It's a very interesting country, I learned about the real politic situation and life style of the people lives there. You can find there several ways to have fun. Places with long story, live music and the most beutiful beaches I had ever seen. But I wouldn't like to live there. People are restringed to do many things. Internet conection and cellphone calls are TOO expensive for the live cost, salaries are too lower, and goberment takes unlogic desicion. Even though, life there is very quiet. Security is almost perfect, children doesn't have video games or only games, they play real games jumping and laughing, education is totally free same that service health. To be in Cuba is like too be in another world.
25 mag 2013 16:34
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My last vacation

I love to travel and enjoy exploring places, things to do and getting to use other currencies. My last travel was to Cuba which is a very interesting country. I learned about the real political situation and life style of the people who live there.

In Cuba you can find many places to have fun. Places with long history, places with live music and the most beautiful beaches I had ever seen. But I wouldn't like to live there. People are restricted from doing many things. Internet connections and cellular service are TOO expensive for the cost of living, salaries are too low, and the government makes illogical desicions.

Life in Cuba is very quiet and security is almost perfect. Children don't have video games, they play real games, They jump and laugh. Education is totally free, the same as public health.

To be in Cuba is like being in another world.

 

 

Hamid,

Thanks for our conversation via Skype of this afternoon. In your text above, I not only corrected mistakes, I also tried to replace some words to make your entry more fluent. If you would like, I can make a recording and email it to you for reference.

Have a nice weekend. Hasta la proxima!

25 maggio 2013

Last vacations

I love traveling. I enjoy searching places, things to do, and learning about new bills and coins. My last trip or vacation was to Cuba. It's a very interesting country, I learned about the real politic situation and lifestyle of the peoples' lives there.
You can find (or there are) several ways to have fun. There are places with long stories, live music, and the most beutiful beaches I had (or have) ever seen, but I wouldn't like to live there. The people are restringed to do many things. Internet conection and cellphone calls are TOO expensive for the live cost, salaries are too small, and government makes ilogical desicions.

Even though, life there is very quiet. Security is almost perfect, children doesn't have video games or only online games, they play real games like jumping and laughing. Education is totally free and so is health care.

To be in Cuba is like too be in another world.

25 maggio 2013

Last vacation

I love traveling. I enjoy discovering places, things to do, know new bills and coins. My last travel was to Cuba. It's a very interesting country, I learned about the real politic situation and life style of people live there.
You can have fun in several ways. Visit ancient places , live music and the most beutiful beaches I had ever seen. But I wouldn't like to live there. People are restringed to do many things. Internet conection and cellphone calls are TOO expensive for the live cost, salaries are too low, and goberment takes unlogic desicion. 


Even though, life there is very quiet. Security is almost perfect, children don't have video games or only games, they play real games jumping and laughing, education is totally free same that service health.

To be in Cuba is like too be in another world.

25 maggio 2013
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