Childhood dream

When I was a little girl,I liked painting so much. I always draw drew everything what I see saw, and I have never doubted that to be an artist is definitely my destiny was to be an artist. But what make made me sad is that was all the kids in the Kindergarten said that my picture was too so bad, and so creepy and ugly. I was so frustrated in that time then. I didn't want to go to school and was afraid to tell my parents,. bBut you know, children always cann't can't always make choices for themself themselves, especially me, as I'm a goody-goody,. sSo I go went to school and dropped to painting. That's was a really a bad time in my life. Well, many years past, and I never draw drew again, and when I grow grew up, I finally know realized that I'm really not good at it,and, even though I just love it,. and aAt least,I learnt something from that,. tThere is always a better word in the earth than work hard, it's a gift!

You need to look at using commas and full stops correctly. All the yellow marking is where you needed to leave a space. Remember, always leave a space after a comma or full stop. Also you need to look at using past tense and making sure your tenses match throught whole sentences and indeed the whole piece. 

Childhood dream

When I was a little girl,I liked painting so much. I always drew anything I saw and I never doubt of becoming an artist. In the Kindergarten, kids said my drawing was too bad,so creepy and ugly.I was so frustrated at that time. I didn't want to go to school and i was afraid to tell my parents but you know, children always can't make choices for themselves. I'm not a goody-goody, so when I got to higher level in school, i dropped painting.That's really a bad time in my life. Well, many years has passed and I have never drawn again and growing up, I finally know that I 'm really not good at it,and I just love it,and at least, I learn something from that. There is always a better word in the earth than work hard, it's gift!

Childhood dream

When I was a little girl,I like painting so much. (you should write the folowing sentence in past tense)I always draw drew everything what that I see saw ,and I have never doubt that to be being an artist is definitely my destiny . But (the thing that) make me sad is that all kids in the Kindergarten said that my picture drawings was too bad,so creepy and ugly.I was so frustrated in that time. I didn't want to go to school and but I was fraid to tell my parents,but you know ,children always can't make choices for themself,especially I'm a goody-goody, so I go went to school and drop to painting.That's was a really a bad time in my life. Well, many years past,I never draw again, and when I grow up,I finally know that I 'm really not good at it,and I just love it,and at least,I learn something from that, there is always a better word in the earth than working hard, it's gift!