My baby
I bore my baby on Apr.12.Now he is 2months old, and he is very healthy and handsome. Although he is a little one, he usually smiles and sometimes "talk" with us. But he is a yellow-bellied baby, when he hears some sound, he may cry out loud.Being a mother makes me happy. I love you, baby.
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My baby
I bore my baby on Apr.12. Now He is now 2 months old, and he is very healthy and handsome. Although he is a little one, he usually smiles and sometimes "talks" with us. But he is easily scared - when he hears some sound, he may cry out loud. Being a mother makes me happy. I love you, baby.
[Good work. 'Yellow-belly' is a very insulting and bad term to use. I don't think that was the tone you want to use with your baby. Another, more innocent term is 'fraidy-cat'.]
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I think the thing you want to express is "he is a little shy and sensitive" .
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