Describe a line graph
The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Answer:
The line graph provides data on the figure of birth rates in two different countries, namely China and the USA over a 8-decade period from 1920 to 2000. As can be seen, the percentage of those who were born fluctuated, however overall trend was downward.
To specify, for the first 30 years, dramatically fluctuations were recorded in the proportion of giving birth in both China and the USA. Starting at roughly 10 percent, the China’s birth rate experienced a significant variation to reach the point of five percent remaining from 1940 to 1945, while the similar pattern was seen in the USA with the birth rate hitting the lowest point of under five percent in 1945. Afterwards, the percentage of giving birth in 2 nations plummeted to a peak at 20 and 15 percent respectively, in 1950.
Meanwhile, there were gradual reductions in China’s as well as the USA’s birth rates over the last period. The figure of China decelerated noticeably for the next five years before a slightly decline to the lowest point of approximately two percent in the last year. The same pattern was shown in the statistic of the USA to reach the point of 7 percent in 2000.
To sum up, the gap between the birth rates of 2 countries got widened with time although the starting point was almost the same.
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