I Like the Rain

I like rain.__I like to stand by the window watching it fall the rain.__There is is a river near my home.__While Whenever it is rainsing, ,I look out from the window and seeing how  ,the misty river is misted, openeding its mouth swollen to swallow the raindrops.__At that this moment, it is as if I can hear the sounds of joy from the rain running pitter-pattering/falling into the river.__I like walking in the rain with an umbrella. .when it's raining ,all People looked funny in the rain.__Some people are without umbrellas run scurrying around fast.while others Some people get are completely soaked; wet.__Some people  cursing away in unhappiness.  the rain look very unhappy,Some Women with in beautiful dresses are watching out being splashed upon  the water when by passing cars pass by.

I like to walking in the rain with an umbrella , and hearing the sound of rain dropping onto my umbrella.[Great sentence to reiterate your thoughts.  However, you need to change the structure since you have used the same structure previously.  This form gives more emphasis rather the more general comment earlier.] .It is like music to my ears.i really like the rain sound. I love this rainy the evening rain.__To hearing the rain its sound ,thinking makes me think of the past time and old friends I have not been seen for a long, long time...

Tonight it's raining again...

Great writing but you need to pay more attention to the mechanics of the language.  Learn how to use paragraphing other visual tricks to delineate your thoughts.  學識多些詞句才能發揮你的英文神筆 :)

I like rain

I like rain. I like standing by the window watching rain. There is is a river near my home. While it's raining, I look out from the window. The river is misted, opening its mouth swollen by the rain. At that moment as I hear the sound of joy from rain running into the river, I like walking in the rain with an umbrella. When it's raining, all people look funny. Some people without umbrellas run fast. Some people get completely wet. Some people curse the rain and look very unhappy. Some women with beautiful dresses, watch out for the water when cars pass by.  I like walking in the rain with an umbrella, hearing the sound of rain dropping on my umbrella like music. I really like the rain sound. I love this rainy evening, hearing the rain sound, thinking of the past time and old friends who I have not been seen for long time...
Tonight it's raining.

I like rain

I like rain.I like stand by window watching rain.There is is a river near my home.While its raining ,I look out from the window ,the river is misted, opening its mouth swollen the rain.at that moment as if I hear the sound of joy from rain running into the river.i like walking in the rain with umbrella .when it's raining ,all people look funny .Some people without umbrella run fast.Some people get completely wet.Some people cursing the rain look very unhappy,Some women with beautiful dress watch out the water when cars pass by. I like walking in the rain with umbrella ,hearing the sound of rain dropping my umbrella .like music.i really like the rain sound.i love this rainy evening.hearing the rain sound,thinking of the past time and old friends I have not been seen for long time...
Tonight it's raining.

I like the rain  (the is optional but I think it is better with it)
I like the rain.  I like to stand by the window watching the rain. There is a river near my home.  While it is (its is a possessive noun, different from it is) raining I look out through the window; the river is misted, opening its mouth swallowing the rain and at that moment I like to hear the sound of joy from the rain running into the river. I like walking in the rain with an umbrella.  when it is raining all people look funny.  Some people without an umbrella run fast, som other people get completely wet (you can also use soaked). Some people cursing the rain look very unhappy.  Some women with beautiful dress watch out for splashes when the cars pass by. I like walking in the rain with an umbrella, hearing the sound of the rain dropping on my umbrella, like music. I really like the rain's sound. I love this rainy evening. Hearing the rain's sound, thinking of the past time and old friends I have not seen for a long time...
Tonight it's raining! (end it with an exclamation point to give it more force).