A bad experience about learning english
1) I took an English Training Class recently, which is taught on line.
这是过去的事情,所以要用过去时态: I took an English Training Class recently, which was taught on line.
2) I have took 2 classes
没有这个动词结构,要么是I took 2 classes,要么是I have taken 2 classes。两者的含义稍微不一样,可以参考语法书。
3) , and I'm so disappointed with it,
it是单数,但你上了两次课,所以用it不适合,应该用them。
4) because I think I can't improve my English by taking these kind of class,
these后面的名词要是复数形式,即kinds,要不可以写this kind。然后,接下来的名词也要与前面的对应,就是说,this kind of之后的名词要是单数形式,these kinds of之后的要是复数的。还有,句子写完了要用句号标志,而不用逗号。
5) In the class, I can't talk with the teacher ,
过去的事情要用过去时态叙述: In the class, I couldn't talk with the teacher
6) the most sentences I can hear are “well done”"that's good""move on", but it's not good really!
这个句子结构有问题。你想说什么?句子能听到得最多是“well done”等?“最多”是修饰“听到”,而不是修饰“句子”,英文里的道理的是一样的,应该写: The sentences I heard the most were "well done", "that's good", "move on", and so on.
还有,又犯了时态的错误。要记得,过去的事情用过去时态。
7) What I want to learn is what's the meaning of this word,
词语顺序有错,应该写:What I want to learn is what the meaning of this word is,
建议你参考语法书深究。
8) how to use this word, and when we will use it,
用will是典型的中式英语错误。“会”有时候可以翻页成“will”,但并不是所有的“会”都可以用“will”表达。“will”只能用来表达将来时态,但你的原句是想表达一般情况,虽然中文里可以用“会”,但英文里用“will”不恰当。最好写:and when we should use it
9) and I want to talk about some stories, then the teacher can point out my mistake, and so on.
独立的句子应该用句号分开,不能想中文一样地用逗号连起一系列的独立的句子,即:I want to talk about some stories. Then the teacher can point out my mistakes, and so on.
还有,要注意,形容一般情况的时候,要用复数形式,就是mistake应该改为mistakes,因为除非你知道仅有一个错误,否则应该用不定量的复数形式。
10) Unfortunately, I can get nothing from this class,
错误有几个,首先应该用过去时态,其次虽然I can get nothing不算错,但不地道,应该改成I can't get anything(时态暂时没改),最后,你上了两次课,应该用复数形式,即classes。应该写: Unfortunately I couldn't get anything from these classes.
11) how can I do?
没有这个说法。What can I do?
12) I feel so bad, because I want to learn english well, but I can't find a right way to learn it....
好吧,这句过得去。
A bad experience about learning English online
I took an online English Training Class recently, which with is taught on line. I have took taken 2 classes, and I'm so very disappointed with it, because I think I can't improve my English by taking these this kind of class. In the class, I can't talk with the teacher, the most sentences I can hear most often are “well done” "that's good" "move on", but it's not good really! What I want to learn is about what's the meaning of this word, how to use this word, and when we will use it, and I want to talk about some stories, then so that the teacher can point out my mistakes, and so on. Unfortunately, I can get nothing from this class, so what how can I do? I feel so bad, because I want to learn English well, but I can't find {a right good way/the right way} to learn it....