My first pet
When i was 10 years old my motherfinally bought me a pet, it was a fish. I was very excited because it was my firs pet so I took care of it very carefully, but one day I found the fish died. After that I never want any kind of pet. I think it was like a trauma.
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My first pet
When I was 10 years old my mother finally bought me a pet, it was a fish. I was very excited because it was my first pet, so I took care of it very carefully, but one day I found the fish had died. After that I never wanted any kind of pet. I think it was like a trauma.
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My first pet
When i was 10 years old my motherfinally bought me a pet, it was a fish. I was very excited because it was my firs pet so I took care of it very carefully, but one day I found the fish died. After that I never want any kind of pet. I think it was like a trauma.
My First Pet
When I (i) was 10 years old, my mother finally bought me a pet, it was a fish. I was very excited because it was my first (firs) pet so I took very great care of it (very carefully,). One (but one) day I found the fish had died and after that I never want any kind of pet. I think it was like a trauma.
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