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visit a grave I went to go visit a grave today. There is who my grandmother rest. It is too noisy for me that the chirp of a cicada. 今日はお墓参りに行きました。 そこには、私の祖母が眠っています。 蝉の鳴き声が、とてもうるさかったです。

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You already have a great correction, but I thought I would have a try too.

 

visit a grave

Visiting the Grave

 

I went to go visit a grave today.

I visited a grave today.


There is who my grandmother rest.

It is where my grandmother rests.


It is too noisy for me that the chirp of a cicada.

The chirp of the cicadas drowned out everything.

 

I really like your story. It feels very poignant, and poetic.

 

I went to a grave.

It is here my Grandma rests.

Summer cicadas.

 

That is my poor attempt at making a haiku of your idea.

 

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Visiting A Grave

I went to visit a grave today, where my grandmother rests.
The chirp of cicadas broke the silence there.

今日はお墓参りに行きました。
そこには、私の祖母が眠っています。
蝉の鳴き声が、とてもうるさかったです。

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