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My business trip to Singapore I went to Singapore for business purpose. My manager booked one room only and I have to live with her. She was all good until one night I went down to the hotel lobby to have a call because I don't feel comfortable to have she around while I'm calling. She started to be mad and yelled at me through phone later. she said I can not go out alone, "you are here to work but not for fun! "she said. Well, I had to go shopping with her for two days and she bought LV, I guess this is not fun for her.

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My business trip to Singapore

I went to Singapore for business purpose.
My manager booked one room only and I have to live with her. She was all good until one night I went down to the hotel lobby to have a call because I don't feel comfortable to have she around while I'm calling. She started to be mad and yelled at me through phone later. she said I can not go out alone, "you are here to work but not for fun! "she said.
Well, I had to go shopping with her for two days and she bought LV, I guess this is not fun for her.

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My Business Trip to Singapore

I recently accompanied my manager on a business trip to Singapore. She only booked one room for the both of us.  Everything was fine until the night I went down to the lobby to make a personal phone call. I just didn't feel comfortable with her listening in on my conversation. She got very angry about my absence and called me later to say that I was not allowed to go out alone. She said, "You are here to work, not for fun!"

The next two days I had go shopping with her and watch her Louis Vuitton purchases. I guess she does not consider that to be "fun".

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I just want to comment on your use of the phrase "She was all good ...".  This is a very casual idiom that you might hear in spoken conversations (e.g. "Hey man, it's all good."), but is not correct grammar and is not appropriate in formal writing.

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My Business Trip to Singapore

 

I went to Singapore for on a business trip purpose.


My manager booked one room only and so I have to live share it with her. She was all good until one night when I went down to the hotel lobby to have make a private call. because I don't didn't feel comfortable to have she around while I'm calling. She started to be became mad and yelled at me through the phone later. She said fumed  that I can not cannot go out alone. "You are here to for work but and not for fun!"she said.


Well, Then you know what? I had to go shopping with her for two days and she bought a LV. I guess this is not fun for her Of course this is not fun for her!  She was not alone! [這样寫法, 強調更有效 :) ]

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