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nursery Today, I visited my friends, Key and Riku. We met at baby food class organized by the city, and we're in same group of cooking practice. From then, we're good friends. That kind of friend is called mama-tomo(mama-friend) in Japanese. We talked a lot and had a good time. Our children are going to be 1 year old this month. We were trying to get job after first birthday. Key and Riku said they've already got. I haven't got a job yet, but I applied an unemployment office last week, so I think I'll get one soon. However, problem is lack of nursery! I don't worry about getting a job, but I worry about getting a nursery. It's a big social issue in Japan. I applied for public nursery, but even if my request was approved, it would be April. Until then, I have to find a private nursery.It would be a hard work. I feel anxious about getting separated from my sweet baby, but I'm going to go for it! I hope I'll get a good job and good nursery for my daughter.

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Today, I visited my friends, Key and Riku.
We met at the baby food class organized by the city, and we're in the same group (of) for cooking practice.
(From) Since then, we have been good friends.
That kind of friend is called mama-tomo(mama-friend) in Japanese.
We talked a lot and had a good time.

Our children are going to be 1 year old this month.
We were trying to get a job after their first birthdays.
Key and Riku said they've already got a job.
I haven't got a job yet, but I applied to an unemployment office last week, so I think I'll get one soon.

However, the problem now is the lack of a nursery!
I don't worry about getting a job, but I worry about getting a nursery.
It's a big social issue in Japan.
I applied for the public nursery, but even if my request was approved, it would be April before I hear back from them.
Until then, I have to find a private nursery. It will be (a) hard work.

I feel anxious about getting separated from my sweet baby, but I'm going to go for it!
I hope I'll get a good job and a good nursery for my daughter.

Very well written, well done! Most problems seem to be with small connecting words like 'the' or 'a', which I know can be tricky to learn. Good luck on the job search and in finding a nursery for your daughter! 頑張ってください!

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