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My Christmas Holiday
I spent my Christmas holiday in Georgia. It's a fantastic country! There are a lot of beautiful mountains!
Tbilisi is a capital of Georgia. And for me it's the best city to walk, relax and think about my life. At this time I decided to stay in a holet (not at my friend's home) and visit some sights in Tbilisi. I want to tell that the hotels are reasonably priced and the area is safe. There are a lot of large houses which have been turned into small hotels. As a result they have a good, warm and friendly atmosthere. The rooms a small but they are kept clean and have a tea-tray. So you can make yourself a cup of tea or coffee if you want.
The Georgia's food is the best! There are a lot of meat dishes, local types of cheese, fruit, cakes, wine! I think I must have put some weights.
So, I managed to visit the main sights in Tbilisi, go for a walk in the historical center, get in touch with my friends and meet interesting people! When I came to Tbilisi I was very sad and my mood was...it was a disaster. Because suddenly I had to celebrate New Year alone...and I didn't want to do anything. But Georgia helps me to relax and get me a good mood. When I came back to Moscow I was fine. And now my life is better, than last year. I trust the best things will be in the future!
Happy New Year!
'a capital of Georgia' : the capital of Georgia
'At this time . . ' : This time . .
'holet' : hotel
'I want to tell that . . ' : I want to say that . .
'atmosthere' : atmosphere
'The rooms a small' : The rooms are small
'and have a tea-tray. So you can make . . ' : and have a tea-tray so you can make . .
'The Georgia's food' : Georgian food OR Food in Georgia
'put some weights' : put on some weight
'historical center' : historic center
'Georgia helps me to relax and get me a good mood' : Georgia helped me (to) relax and get/put me in a good mood
'better, than last year' : better than last year
We all hope that the best is yet to come - may it be so !
Suggested corrections, hope that it helps!
My Christmas Holiday
I spent my Christmas holiday in Georgia. It's a fantastic country! There are a lot of beautiful mountains!
Tbilisi is a the capital of Georgia. And for me In my opinion, it's the best city to for walking, relaxing and thinking about my life. At This time I decided to stay in a holet hotel (and not at my friend's home) and to visit some of the sights in Tbilisi. I want to tell let you know that the hotels are reasonably priced and that the area is safe. There are a lot of large houses which have been turned into small hotels. As a result they have a good, warm and friendly atmosphere atmosthere. The rooms are small but they are kept clean and have a tea-trays. So you can make yourself a cup of tea or coffee if you want.
The Georgia's Georgian food is the best! There are a lots of meat dishes, local types of cheeses, fruit, cakes, wine! I think I must have put on some weights.
So, I managed to visit the main sights in Tbilisi, to go for a walk in the historical center, to get in touch with my friends and to meet interesting people! When I came to Tbilisi I was very sad and my mood was...well, it was a disaster. Because suddenly I had to celebrate New Year alone...and I didn't want to do anything. But being in Georgia helped me to relax and get me to be in a good better mood. When I came got back to Moscow I was felt fine. And now my life is better, than it was last year. I trust that the best things are still yet to come will be in the future!
Happy New Year!
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