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Talking about the future
Currently I'm studying education at University. I'm a third year student, therefore next year I will get my degree in teaching (I hope). After this career I would like to achieve one of my dreams; living in America and learning how to survive there on my own. I want to continue my studies or find a job there.
It'll be tough, I know, but people were born to take risks, improve themselves everyday, and face challenges.
Have a nice weekend =)
Currently I am studying education in college, where I am a junior, and I hope to earn a batchelor's degree in teaching when I graduate next year. One of my other hopes is to one day live in The United States of America. My dream is to be able to afford to relocate there on my own, and either continue my education, or find employment teaching.
It will be tough, I know, but I believe that I was born to take risks to better myself, and accept life's challenges.
Talking about the future
Currently I´m studying education at University,. I´m in 3rd grade, therefore, next year, I will get my degree in teaching (i hope so). After the career I graduate, I would like to achieve one of my dreams; living in America and learning how to get by there on my own (learning how to "succeed" there on my own might be a better phrase, since you it's not hard learning how to get here). I am fond I hope to continue my studies or finding a job there.
It´ll be tough, I know, but people were born to take risks, improve to become a better person every day and to lead with challenges.
Have a nice weekend =)
I hope that helps! In the last paragraph, I changed all the verbs to infinitives (to x) to create parallel struture. The sentence flows better (in my opinion) when the same structure is used throughout.
Also, where do you study? Estudié at La Universidad de Deusto hace muchos años. Me encanta Bilbao y espero que disfrutes los kalimotxos!
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