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3line Dialy *It would be appreciated If you corrected these sentence. 【13 January】 It was snow.(雪) It's been a long time since I play golf.(久しぶりにゴルフに行った。) I was glad becouse I remenber a knack of shot of golf today. (今日、コツを思い出せたので嬉しい。) I was convinced what I can fell far short of my golf score within the year. (今年中にスコアが縮むと確信してます。)

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3line Dialy

*It would be appreciated If you corrected these sentence.

【13 January】

It was snow/snowing/snowy.  (depends if it is in response to a qustion and how that question was worded: 

You can say 'it was snow' if in answer to a question 'what type of weather did you have?' alternatively you could say 'it was snowing' or 'it was snowy'.

 

It's been a long time since I played golf.

 

I was glad because (becouse) I remembered how to play (remenber a knack of shot of) golf today. 

 
I was convinced I would be able to reduce (what I can fell far short of) my golf score within the year.

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It was snowy.
It's been a long time since I played golf.
I was glad because I remembered some tips on how to swing. (?)
I was convinced that I can lower my golf score within the year.

Good job! Keep it up Sumio

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