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task1 Many people think that work nowadays is more stressful and less leisurely than in the past. But I don't think so. In the past, people also fell stressful and they don't have enough entertainment as much as today. Nowadays we can watching movies, listening music or searching for psychologist for help. But why it seems modern people have more stress? It thanks to the Information Age, we can easier to amplify the stress and pain through the internet. Actually, we are not bad as we described.

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Many people think that work nowadays is more stressful and less leisurely than in the past, . But I don't agree think so. In the past, people also fell stressful felt stressed and they don't have enough didn't have as much entertainment as much as we do today. Nowadays we can watch watching movies, listening listen to music or searching search for a psychologist for help. But So why does it seems modern people have more stress? It is thanks to the Information Age, we can easier to amplify the stress and pain through the internet that our stress and pain is amplified (increased?) through the internet.  Actually, we are not bad as we described.

 

"less leisurely" - this is an awkward way of expressing what I think you are trying to say.  Simply saying "more stressful" is adequate

 

Saying "agree" is better that saying "think so" as you have given an argument in the first part of teh sentence to which you will offer an alternative.

 

 

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