correct my mistakes please What would you change about your hometown? I was born in Trabzon and I still live there. Trabzon is very small city about 20.000 people reside. Moreover all my family, relative and friends still live in this city. One day if I have a opportunity, I would like to change several things. Firstly, I would built couple school and university because of education. Education is the most important power all over the world. I believe if my hometown has a lot of school we will make money or built house so basically we can get better life condition after that we will be more happy and peaceful than pass. For example, when we look at the development country in the world, they have very high education rate and this status make them happy and more cultured. Secondly, I would open couples factory around the city to help to people finding a easy job and make money. If city has enough workshop, this mean there are a lot of positive opportunity such as decrease unemployment rate, bringing money into the city and so forth. Furthermore, another important advantage is, the people might improved their skills than start opening their own store and company. Lastly, I would open more public hospital because my hometown has only three hospitals. In our day, healthy staff is very expensive such as insurance, medicine therefore if There are enough hospital, the doctor can help the patient right a way and treat their problem as soon as possible. For example in our city there are onlyt three hospital. If the patient goes at the hospital, the registration give them appointment and this meeting takes time between patient and doctor even sometimes they could not get any treatment. To conclude, There are three important facts what I mention upper the article. I am certainly change those three things if I have a opportunity because those three factors are made to people more happy and peaceful. That is the reason I would change those because the most important things for me, I want to see my neighbored living on the good condition while they are happy.