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so happy Today I had my hair cut.I like this style very much.And today I had been paid from my part-time job in this winter vocation.I like my live,my parents and myself.

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So happy

Today, I had my hair cut, I like this style very much. And today had been paid I also received my pay from my the part-time job I had over the in this winter vocation holidays. I like my life, my parents and myself.

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so happy

Today I had my hair cut. I like this style very much.

And today I was had been paid by/for from my part-time job in this winter vacation.

I like my life,my parents and myself.

 

Notes: It's a tricky sentence with a couple options to sound more fluent...

"And today I was paid for my part-time job this winter vacation."

You can also write: "And today I was paid for my part time work this past winter vacation."

OR: "And today I got paid for my part time work from this winter vacation."

Any combination of those sounds a little better. Be careful about using And to start a sentence. In strict English classes and rules, I was taught, a long time ago, that this is not formally acceptable, but nowadays we see it often.

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Today I had my hair cut. I like this style very much. (Very good :)) (Correction:) And today I was paid for my part-time job this winter vacation. (ALSO: And today I was paid for my part time work this past winter vacation.) (OR: And today I got paid for my part time work from this winter vacation.) (Any combination of those sounds a little better. Be careful about using And to start a sentence. In strict English classes and rules, I was taught that this is not formally acceptable, but nowadays we see it often.) I like my my life, my parents and myself. (Very good :))

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