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Sunny day. Today is a sunny day. I feel warm and happy. I should go to school to have some classes. It's a rest time of first class,so I write a short message to show my emotion. I like sunny day. In sunny day,I can run in the courtyard. And I also play badminton with my friends. I always don't know what to eat in lunch. And I ask my roommates about this question. They usually laugh at me. Actually,I just express I'm hungry or I just feel boring. In fact,I'm glad to make friends with all of you. That makes me feel good every time.

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Sunny day.

Today is a sunny day. I feel warm and happy. I should go to school to have some classes This sentence is a little odd. In English we typicially say "I should go to class." This sentence already implies that you have some classes to attend! =)  . It's a rest time of first class (its break between classes),so I write a short message to show my emotion. I like sunny day. In sunny day,I can run in the courtyard. And I also play badminton with my friends. I always don't know what to eat in at lunch. And I ask my roommates about this question. They usually laugh at me. Actually,I just express I'm hungry or I just feel boringnice try, but you should say bored =D .
In fact,I'm glad to make friends with all of you. That makes me feel good every time. (lets be language partners?? :D)



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