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G Ielts writing- applying for a job You have seen a job advertised in your local newspaper. Write a letter of application. Introduce yourself and give details of your experience and say why you’d like the job. Dear Sir/Madam, I have seen your company's job advertised in Melbourne Time. I would like to apply the position of student assistant. Last year, I graduated from Melbourne University after studying accounting for three years. I am 22-year-old and having a part- time job in City language school as a student assistant. My working contract will be finished on next week. Therefore, I want to apply the new job. For my experience, I had a part-time job as private tutor to teach high school students. It totally enriches my working experience and makes me to realise the importance of communication with people. Now I think I am able to take the position to help students efficiently. Moreover, I am interested in the job because I enjoy to help students to solve their problems and difficulties in study aspect and life area. I will be appreciate if I have an opportunity to take the job. Thanks for your time. I am looking forward to hear you as soon as convenience. Your sincerely vi

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G Ielts writing- applying for a job

You have seen a job advertised in your local newspaper. Write a letter of application. Introduce yourself and give details of your experience and say why you’d like the job.

Dear Sir/Madam,
I have seen your company's job advertised in Melbourne Time. I would like to apply for the position of student assistant. Last year, I graduated from Melbourne University after studying accounting for three years. I am 22-years-old and have a part- time job in City language school as a student assistant. My working contract will finish next week. Therefore, I want to apply for the new job.

For my experience, I had a part-time job as private tutor to teach high school students. It enriched my working experience and made me realise the importance of communication with people. Now I think I am able to take the position to help students efficiently. Moreover, I am interested in the job because I enjoy helping students to solve their problems and difficulties in both study and life.

I will appreciate the opportunity to take this position. Thanks for your time. I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as convenient.
Your sincerely
vi

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