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dogs in shelter I like a reality dog show called: Dog Whisperer, and the host is Cesar Millan. I have never had a dog. I thought dogs are irrational and fear that they might bite me. When I watched the show for the first time, I understand that dogs are not a horrible creature, instead, they are very loyal and considerate. Cesar said adopting a dog is better than buying, so I decided to pick a stray dog from a shelter in my city. Unfortunately, the officer told me they have no dogs! It is weird because Taiwan has a lot of stray dogs. My mom asked one of her friends who knows very well about shelters. She said, because Chinese New Year was coming, those keepers of the shelter put all of the dogs to sleep. Therefore, they don't have to feed dogs during the Chinese New Year holidays.

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Dogs in Shelters

I like a TV show about dogs called: Dog Whisperer. The host of this show is Cesar Millan.
I have never had a dog because I have always been afraid that and fear that they might bite me.
After watching the show for the first time, I understood that dogs are not a horrible creatures, instead, they are very loyal and considerate.
Cesar said adopting a dog is better than buying one, so I decided to pick up a stray dog in a shelter in my city.
Unfortunately, the officer told me they have no dogs!
It is weird because Taiwan has a lot of stray dogs.
My mom asked one of her friends who knows a lot about shelters.
She said, because Chinese New Year was coming, those shelter keepers of the shelter put all of the dogs to sleep because the Chinese New Year was coming.
Therefore, they wouldn't have to feed dogs during the holidays.

It was very well written! Your vocabulary is VERY good, your grammar is fine, too!...
I am really sorry shelter keepers are so unprincipled in your city... I hope that you will find and adopt a pet very soon!

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