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My favourite activities
I live in a coutry where people are very sensitive (I would prefer "caring" over "sensitive"), meaning we love one another. So one of my favourite activities is to help my fellow human being (Human being is a big word. Why not try words like "friends" "neighbors" and "villagers"?) and specially my little brothers and sisters. Beside I am a member of an English club whose name is "MALIKA CONNECTION OF ENGLISH LOVERS" and we meet every saturday to talk about issues like "environmental or ecological awareness, youth and job, leadership" and so one (Do you mean "and so on"?) and so fourth.
My favourite activities
I live in a country where people are very sensitive, meaning we love one another. So one of my favourite activities is to help my fellow human beings and especially my little brothers and sisters. Besides that I am a member of an English club whose name is "MALIKA CONNECTION OF ENGLISH LOVERS" and we meet every Saturday to talk about issues like "environmental or ecological awareness, youth and jobs, leadership" and so one and so fourth.
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