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NEW CLUBS AFTER SCHOOL I´ve just readed this brochure which gave me a young and cheerful girl I met in the playground of my school. I was amazed when I realised how many differnente things, studentes can do in their free time. It was my First year in that place and I couldn,t believe how I had wasted my time in my previous school. In my previous school the only thing we can do was studing all day. I was glad to have settle down in a city with this life style. I,ve never though I could end up in a place like this. It was a surprise the school offer us so many activities to spend our time. There were several activities like chees, table tennis, guitar playing and cookery. Now ,I had a very serious problem, which one would I choose? Whichever one I liked, but I only had the chance to devote at one of that due to my lack of time. I work in a burger twice a week. I had fear not to choose the correct decisión but I had to do it. First of all I had to decide with which one of those options I had to enjoy more. I´d like cookery but I had to remember I had to lose weight now that (because- ya que) lately I had got fat a lot because of my new sedentary life. I knew I had to do some exercise to get over the fisical condition I had few months ago. Table tennis would be my decision althoug I would have prefer other kind of harder sport like football, rugby or something like that.

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NEW CLUBS AFTER SCHOOL

I´ve just readed this brochure which a young and cheerful girl I met in the playground of my school gave me . (Pay attention to the word order. DON'T let your Spanish affect you) I was amazed when I realised how many differnente (Spanish) things that studentes can do in their free time. It was my first year in that place and I couldn't believe how I had wasted my time in my previous school. In my previous school the only thing we could do was study all day.
I was glad to have settled down in a city with this life style. I've never thought I could end up in a place like this.
It was a surprise the school offered us so many activities to spend our time.
There were several activities like chess, table tennis, guitar playing and cookery. Now ,I had a very serious problem. Which one should I choose? I liked each one of them, (Spanish word order again:)) but I only had the chance to devote to one of them due to my lack of time. I work in a burger twice a week.
I feared (had fear sounds like tener miedo, Spanish again) not to choose the correct decision (Spanish) but I had to do it. First of all I had to decide with which one of those options I would enjoy more. I´d like cookery but I had to remember I had to lose weight now that (because- ya que) lately I had got fat a lot because of my new sedentary life. I knew I had to do some exercise to get over the fisical condition I had a few months ago. Table tennis would be my decision although I would have prefer other kinds of harder sports like football, rugby or something like that.

 

WOW, your English is way better than my Spanish. I hope we can help each other. :)

Phil from China

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Hello,nice to meet you!I'm Mohamed from Egypt,i wish you be my friend,I'm new here!thank you

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