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First entry. I went out with friends yesterday. Interestingly, i didn't enjoy it as much as I used to be. After I parted away with them around 11:30. I went home straight away.Whilst on my way home, there was this feeling kept telling me in my mind that It's time for me to grow up and face the reality. I kept analysed my day over and over again for why I had that feeling. By the time i got home, I figured tha the main reason why i felt that way was actually the way I organise my priorities in life . Obviously, there is nothing wrong with taking a night out in a week to hangout with friends. But my problem was I made myself a promise to finish the draft of one of the assignment due next week and I didn't fulfil the promise. That's why I feel extremely guilty that I went out last night. I really should start organise my life in a efficient way so i don't feel guilty about going out with my friends anymore.

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First entry.

I went out with friends yesterday. Interestingly, I didn't enjoy it as much as I used to be. After I parted away with them around 11:30. I went home straight away.Whilst on my way home, there was this feeling kept telling me in my mind that kept telling me that it's time for me to grow up and face the reality. I kept analysed analysing my day over and over again for to find out why I had that feeling. By the time I got home, I figured out that the main reason why I felt that way was actually because of the way I organise my priorities in life. Obviously, there is nothing wrong with taking a night out off in a during the week to hang out with friends. But my problem was that I made myself a promise to finish the draft of one of the my assignments due next week and I didn't fulfil the promise. That's why I feel extremely guilty that I went out last night. I really should start to organise my life in an efficient way so I don't feel guilty about going out with my friends anymore.

 

Great job! Don't forget to always capitalize your "I". Keep up the good work :)

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