Moon light
take the moonlight as my pillow
and the chirp of crickets as lullaby
with the memories of the merry past triggered off by
nice dream begin to haunt me late at night
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Moon light/月光
take the moonlight as my pillow /头枕着美丽的月光
and the chirp of crickets as lullaby /蟋蟀唱着动听的摇篮曲
with the memories of the merry past triggered off by /打开大脑深处的快乐记忆
nice dream begin to haunt me late at night/美梦在深夜向我袭来！
Please to tell me: 我的翻译符合你的意思吗？
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thank you for you help there.If you are avialable and wanna practice chinese,you can contact me.waiting for you there.lol
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Poetry can not be corrected because it essentially isn't governed by the normal rules of writing. I could probably make a couple of simple changes that wouldn't affect the feeling of your poem but I won't because I understand it as it is.
You used the tool of metaphor very well in the first two lines.
Well done.
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