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Happy moments. It is wrapped in gentle sunlight of spring, the time a book reading this is happiness.
24 apr 2014 12:43
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Happy moments.

It is wrapped in gentle sunlight of spring. In this time, reading a book is happiness.

25 aprile 2014

Happy moments.

It is wrapped in gentle sunlight of spring, the time a book reading this is happiness.

 

Wrapped in the gentle sunlight of spring, reading a book. This is happiness.

 

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Such beautiful imagery! I changed it to a more poetic style and natural tone. Another way: 

Happiness is the time spent reading a book, wrapped in the gentle sunlight of spring.

 

Enjoy the sunshine! :)

 

24 aprile 2014
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