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10th, May A femal said I was a naive people, said whatever I want, but no mean to harm people. There was no pressure to be a friend with me. I was not happy about that, made me realize that I was lucky that I haven't been killed by villain. That friend seems like women, make me scard of that too. Ahhhh, I am not that type. So I say little at the usual time, because I knew what I said always feel them funny, not the humorous way. They will think how could she say that without brain. Ahhh Anyway I am enjoy being alone, always find thing to do.

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10th, May

A femal girl/woman said I was a naive people person,  that I said whatever I want, but no without meaning to harm people. There was no pressure desire to be a friends with me. I was not happy about that. It made me realize that I was lucky that I haven't been killed by a villain. That friend seems to like women. It made me scared of that too. Ahhhh, I am not that type.
So I usually say little at the usual time, because I know that what I said say always makes them feel them funny (not the humorous way).
They will think 'how could she say that without brain brainless thing'. Ahhh
Anyway, I am enjoy being alone. I always find things to do.

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10th, May

A female said I was a naive person, said whatever I want, but no mean to harm people. There was no pressure to be a friend with me. I was not happy about athat, made me realize that I was lucky that I haven't been killed by villains. That friend seems like woman, make me scare of that too. Ahhhh, I am not that type.
So I say little at the usual time, because I knew what I said always feel them funny, not the humorous way.
They will think how could she say that without brain. Ahhh
Anyway I am enjoy being alone, always find thing to do.

 

I corrected what I can.

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10th, May

A woman/girl once said I was a naive person, that I said whatever I want, but without meaning to harm people. There was no pressure to be a friends with me. I was not happy about that, it made me realize that I was lucky that I haven't been killed by someone nasty. That friend seems to like women, which make me scared of that too. Ahhhh, I am not that type.
So I say little at the usual time, because I know what I say always sounds funny to them, not in the humorous way.
They will think, how could she say that without brain? Ahhh!
Anyway, I am enjoy being alone; I always find things to do.

 

Good work, Candice. Be careful with tenses.

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