The first week in Beijing

I have been back in Beijing, China for almost one week, but I can't get used to (it) here. The traffic here is terrible, all these people and cars that never follow the rules. The cars is are beeping (honking) all the time and the people always swear back. With the background of such a large population, the resources become valuable and specious precious, everyone has to compete to acquaire acquire them. The situation and the fact make me sad somehow.

Hi! You're on your way to being really proficient in English. I've made a few corrections to your notebook entry which I think sounds a bit more natural. Your last sentence is a bit tricky, but I would just use either 'situation' or 'fact' (but not both) in this particular case. So it would just be 'This situation/fact makes me sad'. You can also drop the somehow in that sentence.

Well done though, it was a really good paragraph.