Amazing trip!

At For my 14th birthday, my parents decided to go to Da Nang city. I was very happy and surprised. I thought about this travel so much trip a lot before we departed.
It was the first time i I went to somewhere by plane, I felt everything was strange for/to  me. We had two weeks for to enjoying this trip but we didn't only stay at in Da Nang city, we also stayed at in Quang Nam province at my parent's friend's house. I did not like staying at in Quang Nam because i I thought it was very boring and so too far from Da Nang city, but when I lived there I felt was in a good mood and one thing that made me happy was that it is was very near ancient Hoi An ancient. Hoi An is a very beautiful and special place at night with material, light, and a olt lot of foreigners visit there. Quang Nam is a place that has a lot of beaches. Everday, at affternoon in the afternoon my sister and I always went to swimming and enjoyed it very fun much. My favorite(1) impression is not Hoi An, it was but Ba Na hill. I think it is very interesting and amazing. I seat sat on in a large cabin and it that ran moved so very fast. I can saw could see some beautiful sightseeing below, that seemed very wonderful. When I finished the journey on in the cabin I think I wanted to do it again. Finally, we went to Ngu Hanh Son mountain, I did like climbing so i because I felt very tired and hot. and One thing that made me unncomfortable this trip was the weather, it was is so hot, it made you so tired quickly quickly made you very tired.
It was a wonderful trip, and I thought I will never foget this trip and a lot of the memories with my family.

Very well done!  You can communicate your ideas clearly!   

(1) I am guessing that you meant your favorite memory.