Street Art

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The Street Art is the urban art, with urban style. We see street art everywhere time around us , in the street , on the underground,on the way (I don't know what that means), and sometimes at school or on a wall of a supermarket or a tower building. In this art we can find : graffiti, the paintings, the sculptures , the drawings, and dancing ; All these supports help the artist to capture our attention and to send an universal message. We find a lot of focus in the street art, but the main objective of the urbain artist is to denounce the social injustices, the distress , and, at least by sending a mesage. Why is this kind of Art is it sometimes forbidden ? Which activities represente the Street Art ? Is Street Art is a real Art or just something that is drawn ? What feelings Can we feel when we look at an awesome mural or graffti ?

The Dance in the Street Art:
* Street Dance appeared in the Twentieth century. Dancers used their bodies to dance, express themselves and to capture the attention of the crowd. Battles of dance Dance battles were organized and some crew showed up what they can doing in dance, the winner of the battle would win/get a lot of money. Nowadays we can Street Dance anywhere. At the cinema there are many films which promote Street Dance, like :" Street Dance 1 to 3"; "Sexy Dance 1 to 3"; "Honey 1 to 2". Street Dance isn't something forbidden, except the battles with a lot of prize money. This kind of Street Art is liked by the children and teeanagers of our(NOt sure) cities.

The Graffiti in the Street Art:
*Graffities is something punishable by the law. The artists use aerosols to "write" , "graff" or "painting" on a mural, or on a wall of the street.
This kind of hobby is punishable by the law because some people use the art of the graffiti to send racist, sexist, or homophobic message.
But at least , others artists use the graffiti to denounce the socials injustices, the "brainstorming" of the government or just to send a peacefull message. We see the most of graffities in the USA (United States of America) The most popular graffities makes people aware of the situation of their country. There are some graffities artists that we can quote some artists such as Banksy, Above ,Titi Freak or Roa.

In the Street Art, the artist wants to be aware and ponder on the situation of which we are living. Others, painted murals to remind at the society of an historical event, what's happened, like the mural of the summer of '69 in Belfast.

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Singular- Graffiti
Plural- Graffiti

Theres a lot of misused 'the' and 'ing'

But good job! Bon travail!