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Introducing myself
Hello.
My name is Lucía. I'm from a little village in the North of Spain. I am 27 years old and I really need to improve my English (as you can read)
I finished my nursing degree in 2008 and since (that moment) then I have worked in hospitals, nursing homes, psychiatric hospitals...
About my hobbies, I like running, going for a walk with my lovely dog (his name is Coco), reading, going to the beach (here in Cantabria we have wonderful beaches).
I suppose (sopouse) that for English speaking people this text is (dangerous)not great / not perfect ... You probably want to (take your eyes off) stop reading !
Thanks for reading (me) this.
Lucía.
It is very good , well done .
Introducing me
Hello.
My name is Lucía. I'm from a little village in the North os of Spain. I am 27 years old and I really need to improve my English (as you can read see)("See" used this way means perceive).
I finished my nursing degree in 2008 and since that moment time I have worked in hospitals, nursing homes, psychiatric hospitals...
About my hobbies, I like running, going for a walk with my lovely dog (his name is Coco), reading, going to the beach (here in Cantabria we have wonderful beaches).
I sopouse suppose that for English-speaking people this text is dangerous scary... You probably want to take remove your eyes off! (hehe...I understand your humor here)
Thanks for reading me.
Lucía.
Not bad! I wasn't scared too badly...
Introducing me myself
Hello.
My name is Lucía. I'm from a little village in the North os of Spain. I am 27 years old and I really need to improve my English (as you can read).
I finished my nursing degree in 2008 and since that moment then I have worked in hospitals, nursing homes, psychiatric hospitals...
About my hobbies, I like running, going for a walk with my lovely dog (his name is Coco), reading, going to the beach (here in Cantabria we have wonderful beaches).
I sopouse suppose that for English speaking people this text is scarydangerous... You probably want to take off your eyes from the text off!
Thanks for reading me.
Lucía.
Introducing myself
Hello.
My name is Lucía. I'm from a little village in the North os Spain. I am 27 years old and I really need to improve my English (as you can read).
I finished my nursing degree in 2008 and since that moment I have worked in hospitals, nursing homes, psychiatric hospitals...
About my hobbies, I like running, going for a walk with my lovely dog (his name is Coco), reading, going to the beach (here in Cantabria we have wonderful beaches).
I suppose that for English people this text is dangerous... You probably want to take your eyes off!
Thanks for reading.
Lucía.
My name is Lucía. I'm from a little village in the North of Spain. I am 27 years old, and I need to improve my use of the English language. I finished my nursing degree in 2008, and I have worked in hospitals, nursing homes, and psychiatric clinics ever since. My hobbies are running; walking with my lovely dog Coco; reading, and going to the beach, because in Cantabria we have wonderful beaches. I suppose that this text is dangerous for Englishmen, and you probably want to look-away.
¿Por qué eres tan duro contigo mismo, Lucía? Su escritura se estructura bien e interesante de leer. ¡Sigue practicando -- no hay juicio aquí!
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