Correzioni · 4
If you are writting it in past tense which I think you are, then these are some corrections :) I also tried to make the scentences flow better and sound more natural.
My day
Today is the weekend,I got up very late,
今天是周末,我起床很晚
I had my breakfast at lunch time,
我在午餐时间吃的早饭
Then I spoke English to my foreign friends all day
一整天都和我的外国朋友用英语聊天
I find speaking a foreign language is amazing just like magic.
我发现外国语像魔法一样有趣
I love it alot.
我非常喜欢它
But I'm not young ,I want to learn twenty words a day.
但是我现在不年轻,我想每天背诵二十个单词
The words I learned today will forgotten by tomorrow.
如果我今天记住了,我明天就会把这个单词又忘掉
I'm going crazy~
我快疯了
My day weekwend
To day Today is weekend,I get up very late,
今天是周末,我起床很晚
I have a my breakfast at the lunch time,
我在午餐时间吃的早饭
All day talking with my foreign friends in English //Talking with my foreign friends in English all the day .
一整天都和我的外国朋友用英语聊天
I find a foreign language like magic is amazing,
// I find that the foreign language is so amazing just like magic
我发现外国语像魔法一样有趣
I very love it very much
我非常喜欢它
But i'm not young ,I want earning twenty words every day
但是我现在不年轻,我想每天背诵二十个单词
But if i remember the words today I will be foget it tommrow
// then they will soon be forgeten tomorrow
如果我今天记住了,我明天就会把这个单词又忘掉
I'm going crzay~
我快疯了
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