whether women shuld supervise their children or not

The position of women in society has changed markedly in the last twenty years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and are not at home to care for their children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


It is true that some juveniles tend to commit crime due to the lack of their parents’ supervision. I disagree with the viewpoint that mother is the only person who should supervise the children.

On the one hand, married women used to play an important role in looking after their children all days in the past. However, females’ position has changed dramatically nowadays, so they can achieve their own ambitions. For example, some married females want to struggle for the manager position in the company. Working hard all days and all nights becomes routine and they are reluctant to spend valuable time on their children. As a result of this, their adolescents’ growth without certain guidance often leads to juvenile delinquency. Mothers, therefore, should act as supervisors to monitor their children on all parts of their lives, which means that the children do not have chances to behave inappropriately.

On the other hand, married women who are the important members of the families have the right to work and contribute their treasure to the families. Married males should take the responsibility of taking care of their children as well. Their young adults behave in the way that the parents should pay equally attention to, otherwise their children may learn anti-social behavior such as theft or robbery that will be the last thing that their parents want. Besides, if the parents needed to work full-time, they could depend on support from their grandparents or other entrusted people to cope with the situation.

To conclusion, while I agree that married women can have the right to work as men do, they should entrust their children to alternative people.