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News on television I don't know why but the news on television are always bad. They always show the worst of humanity like deaths, kidnapping, accidents, corruptions... I think people want good news too. At least, I want. Aren't there organ donations that save lifes? Aren't there concerts to charity? Aren't there people who travel around the world to help people that they have suffered a tornado and they have lost their houses? Those actions make the world better, and almost nobody knows that they happen every day. I study Environment and I think there should be more environment news to concern the people too. What do you think?

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News on television

I don't know why but the news on television are is always bad. They always show the worst of humanity like deaths, kidnapping, accidents, corruptions... I think people want good news too. At least, that's what I want.

Aren't there organ donations that save lifes? Aren't there concerts to charity charity concerts? Aren't there people who travel around the world to help people that if they have suffered a tornado and they have lost their houses?

Those These actions make the world better a better place, and almost nobody knows that they happen every day. I study Geography and I think there should be more environment environmental news to concern the people inform others too.

What do you think?

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Television News on television


I don't know why but the news on television are always unpleasant bad [bad can also mean substandard, so the meaning is not clear on the first reading until the 2nd line is read]. They always show the worst of humanity like deaths, kidnappings, accidents, corruptions... I think people We want good news too. At least, this is what I want.

Aren't there organ donations that to save lives? Aren't there concerts to for charity? Aren't there people who travel travel around the world to help those who lost their homes due to people that they have suffered a tornado[e]s and they have lost their houses?

These actions make the world better, and hardly one hears of them. almost nobody knows that they happen every day. I study Environmental Science and I think there should be more environment news to concern the people on our environments too.

What do you think?

 

Unpleasant news generate greater excitement.  For the media, the higher ratings and for most of human nature, hearing such news make their lives seem better.  Schadenfreude.

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It's true. I agree with you. It didn't dawn on me. Thank you! =)
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also overall I didn't spot many grammatical or spelling errors, so well done!
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I agree entirely with what you say but sadly the worst of humanity has to be know if progress is to be made.

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