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My Grandmother
My grandmother is a great woman. I was raised by and grew up with her, and she is really nice with me. she has taught me many traditional values, and I am still learning from her. actually, she is a business woman, she rents a number of buildings other than her restaurant and hotels. Anyway, the last week she was sick, she suffered from respiratory infection. I was with her all the time, I gave her the medication, and I served her the best I can could. she appreciated that by giving and gave me about 5000$. I was surprised and said that I don't didn't want anything, but she refused to take it back. I really love this woman, and I wish for her a good health.
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My Grandmother
My grandmother is a great women. I raised and grew up with her, and she is really nice to me. she has taught me many traditional values, and I am still learning from her. She is a business women. She rents a number of buildings other than her restaurant and hotels. Anyway, the last weak she was sick, she suffered from respiratory infection. I was with her all the time, I gave her the medication, and I served her the best I can. she appreciated that by giving me about $5000. I was surprised and said that I don't want anything, but she refused to take it back. I really love this women, and I wish for her a good health.
I appreciate any correction.
You did really well. I'm glad to hear you have such a loving relationship with your grandmother:)
My Grandmother
My grandmother is a great woman. I *was raised with/grew up with) her, and she is really nice to me. she has taught me many traditional values, and I am still learning from her. Actually, she is a business woman, she rents a number of buildings other than her restaurant and hotels. Anyway, the last week she was sick, she suffered from a respiratory infection. I was with her all the time, I gave her medication, and I served her the best I could. she appreciated that and gave me about 5000$. I was surprised and said that I didn't want anything, but she refused to take it back. I really love this woman, and I wish for her good health.
I appreciate any correction.
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