-an essay- The governments have the duty to ensure its citizens have a healthy diet, while others believe it is individuals’ responsibility. Discuss both ideas and give your opinions. 13:22 14:02

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-an essay- The governments have the duty to ensure its citizens have a healthy diet, while others believe it is individuals’ responsibility. Discuss both ideas and give your opinions. 13:22 14:02 In the fast paced society, our standard of life has been largely improved, while some unhealthy habits that go along with the improvement are also appearing, such as the change of our diet. Although some people think governments should be responsible for their citizens in regards to public health, I believe it should be individuals’ issues more. Some people argue that a government, as the top leader of a society, has the duty to make sure that all citizens have a healthy diet and are in good physical conditions. This is mainly because the sustainable development of a nation, whatever in terms of economy, culture or science, requires strong labour force which is crucial for a country to compete with other nations in the world. Also, by putting more of emphasis on citizens’ diet, a government is more likely to get support from its people because the residents can directly feel that their government cares about them. It can also be argued that people themselves should concentrate more on their daily diet. It is generally known that governments are always busy with various political issues. Besides, the way of a government in concerning its citizens is always reflected in health care service, construction of infrastructures, public service, and other macroscopic aspects, instead of in the specific item, such as one’s food habits. Secondly, people are well-informed about the negative impacts that an unhealthy diet would cause. Therefore, if they are accountable men, they get to know how to protect themselves or how to have a strong body so that they are capable of working well and do not let their families worry about their health. In my opinion, it is individuals who should strictly discipline and force themselves to have a good and regular diet, such as designing a balanced recipe or paying more attention to the nutrients they daily intake from the food. This may make people lose opportunities to enjoy certain delicious foods that are not really healthy, but it would be worthy for health.

19 lug 2014 08:45

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-an essay-

The gGovernments have the duty to ensure its citizens have a healthy diet, while others believe it is individual's responsibility. Discuss both ideas and give your opinions.
13:22 14:02

In the fast paced society of today, our standard of life has been largely improved, however while some unhealthy habits that go along with the improvement are also appearing - such as the change of our diet. Although some people think governments should be responsible for their citizens in regards to public health, I believe it should be individual's issues more.

Some people argue that a government, as the top leader of a society, has the duty to make sure that all citizens have a healthy diet and are in good physical conditions. This is mainly because the sustainable development of a nation, whatever in terms of economy, culture or science, requires a strong labour force which is crucial for a country to compete with other nations in the world. Also, by putting more of emphasis on citizen's diet, a government is more likely to get support from its people because the residents can directly feel that their government cares about them.

It can also be argued that people themselves should concentrate more on their daily diet. It is generally known that governments are always busy with various political issues. Besides, the way in which of a government cares about in concerning its citizens is always reflected in the health care service, construction of infrastructures, public service, and other macroscopic aspects, instead of in the a specific item, such as one’s food habits. Secondly, people are well-informed about the negative impacts that an unhealthy diet would cause. Therefore, if they are accountable people men, they get to should know how to protect themselves or and how to have a healthy strong body so that they are capable of working well and do not let their families worry about their health.

In my opinion, it is individuals who should strictly discipline and force themselves to have a good and regular diet, such as designing a balanced recipe or paying more attention to the nutrients that they intake daily intake from the food. This may make people lose opportunities to enjoy certain delicious foods that are not really healthy, but it would be better worthy for health.

Truely excellent. A few notes:

-The main issue with this is apostrophes. When you talk about a society in this way, we talk about it in regards to one person only. So you need to make the word singular and the put an apostrophe before the s that is added.

-There are a few small issues with articles, but this is getting so much better!

-The phrase in the world in yellow needn't be here (and I would omit it), but it can be

-Write people instead of men because it is more politically correct

-Write healthy and not strong because the latter just makes me think of really muscular people

Apart from that, this is awesome.

19 luglio 2014

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