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boring vocation I don't like summer,because it's too hot and makes me uncomfortable.Due to the whether,I merely stay at home and can't go out.However I want to hang out and climb.What's more,I heard that new movie has show.I am willing to see it next week.That's all.

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Boring vocation Vacation (two words with totally different meanings! I guess you are speaking about shujia 暑假? Right? Vocation is your zhiye 职业,天职)

I don't like summer, because it's too hot and makes me uncomfortable. Due to the weather I merely/just stay at home and can't go out. However I want to hang out and or go climbing. What's more, I heard that a new movie is showing has show. I am willing/planning/hoping to see it next week. That's all.

 

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boring vocation

I don't like summer because it's too hot and the heat makes me uncomfortable. Due to the whether weather,I merely just stay at home and can't go out. However I want to hang out with friends and climb. What's more, I heard that a new movie has is showing. I am willing would like to see it next week. That's all.

 

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