CAR ACCIDENT 2
(continuing) Since that disaster, the whole shipping industry has been paying very close attention to passenger safety. So these days, you can often hear in the Republic Of Korea(ROK) bus drivers saying things like this, before departure, "Thanks for using XX Express. Ladies and gentlemen, please fasten your seatbelts until we arrive, for your own safety. We are really glad to have you with us today (blah blah~~)." I don't think I'm a bad guy who doesn't follow the rules. However, today (this accident happened today and I'm writing about it the very same evening) on the bus, it felt boring to me to follow the rules. I thought "Why do I have to follow rules to prevent the kind of accident that has never happened to me even once in my life (25 years)? Accident? There is no such stupid word in my dictionary. I am the son of a good man~!" Holy moly.[<em>exclamation from Batman comics or USA in the past! Not common now</em>]..The uninvited guest finally came to me today..[<em>good grammar but don't understand the meaning in context</em>]. But um... what I experienced is even if you do not fasten your seat belt, you can survive. As a survivor, I think whether you survive, or die, or are injured in a car accident, depends on the angle of impact. But it's not just the angle that is important; there are many other factors that decide how awful an accident is. But just because I am survived from an accident, it doesn't mean I recommend you to loose (<em>do you mean loosen" or "not use"</em>?] your seatbelt. I can still clearly remember the feeling of the vibration when my butt hit the car. I guess this will be a constant reminder for me to fasten my seatbelt for the rest of my life. (This is one lesson I learned from today's accident)
Another thing that I experienced today is I think more important than what I have just described. I want to call it "The Result Of Modern Society." What the other passengers around me who sat at the front of the bus did after the accident was horrible... Although they could see the injured car driver on his/her seat, there was no-one called 119 (Korea's 911). They didn't even talk about calling 119. And what they did made me really really sad. They were busy taking pictures of the car... Now, writing this essay, I feel disgust and rage toward them. I feel like if I could go back in time, then I would throw their stupid cell phones away and crush them.
Why do they not think that an accident could happen to them? Would they be happy indeed if they suffered an accident and onlookers having people who take took a bunch of pictures in front of their chilly corpse without thinking to call 911?
<em>[Well done - ambitious use of vocabulary and grammar. Sometimes your grammar is correct but I have suggested amendments which sound more natural to English-speakers. Hope it helps, Michael]</em>