My Dream

I am a Chinese girl My and I dream is of studying/my dream is to study in England one day, because I love England very much. Why? At In the beginning it is just because I love Harry Potter. Then I found I love England. My family is not rich so I must study hard so that I can to achieve my dream. To be honest, my English is poor. So Can you help me？

My Dream

I am a Chinese girl.  My dream is to study in England one day, because I love England very much.  Why?  In the beginning it's because I love the Harry Potter books.  Then I discovered I love the country.  My family is not rich, so I must study hard so that I can achieve my dream.  To be honest, my English is poor, so can you help me？