My Day in English

Hey everybody, I want to improve my English and my French that's why so I'm here and I hope you enjoy my "essay":
Today, I woke up at 6 a.m. I like to stay get up in the morning and eat with my family. So today I ate some bread with Nutella on it, then I went outside to jogg around the house., where I'm living. After that I was very energetic and wrote some sentences for my French homework at french, (I hate it because who gives students a lot of homework during the summer holidays?) Then I went shopping with my best friend and we got some cool shoes. (Womens ;) ) In the afternoon I cooked some spaghettis with my sister and it got burnt.  ( They got burned in my pan :( )
Sooooo, I know this isn't really interesting but I hope that I can improve my language skills a little bit. ;)

my day in english

Hey everybody (comma) I want to i prove my english and my french so I'm here and I hope you enjoy my "essay":
Today, I woke up at 6 am. I like to stay up in the morning and eat with my family. So today I ate some bread with Nutella on it, then I went outside to jog (just one "g") around the house (no comma before a restrictive relative clause) where I live (Only use the continuous if you're living there on a temporary basis. Actually, you could just say "my house). After that I felt very energetic and wrote some sentences for my French homework (no comma) (I hate it , I mean, who gives students a lot of homework during the Summer holidays?) Then I went shopping with my best friend and we got some cool shoes. (Womens ;) ) (women's shoes, or your friends are women?) In the afternoon I cooked some spaghetti (spaghetti is considered non-countable in English) with my sister ( It got burned in my or "the" pan :( )
Sooooo, I know this isn't really interesting but I hope that I can improve my language skills a little bit ;)

Excellent job, Regina!

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Keep up the great work!

My Day in English

Hey Hi everyone! I want to improve my English and my French. so This is why I'm here and I hope that you enjoy like my "essay".

Today, I woke up at 6 am. I like to stay up in the morning and eat have breakfast with my family. So today I ate had some bread with Nutella on it. then Later, I went outside to jogg around the house, [or "I went for a jog around the house"]where I'm living. Afterwards that I was very energetic inspired enough to write and wrote some sentences for my French homework. at french, (I hate it because who gives students a lot when teachers give plenty of homework during the summer holidays.?) Then I went shopping with my best friend and we got bought some cool-looking shoes. (Womens ;) ) [It is understood.  So no need to be this explicit.  Doesn't give value to your essay] In the afternoon, I cooked some spaghettis with my sister ( but they got burnt in my the pan! :( )

Sooooo, I know this isn't really interesting but I hope that I can improve my language skills a little bit. ;)