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Making friends
It's strange that there are no sessions this week. Do you all enjoy the summer holidays? Why I don't have !!!! Hope you don't forget to practice~~~
Recently I make made several new friends. All of them are kind and patient. I like talking to you all.
I found I merely forget the French and be was a little nervous to speak it out. I am too lazy to practice, I regret for that.
And i have delayed my fiction creation writing for 2 months. Still 'cos my I'm lazy. I need be a supervisor!!!
I will change my bad personality habits and working much more harder :P
Notes:
"Do you all enjoy the summer holidays?" could also be "Are you all enjoying the summer holidays?
"Why I don't have!" Don't have what?
I changed "personality" to "habits" because it's more appropriate in this context.
The first word in a sentence and "I" are always capatilized
Making friends
Its' strange that there are no sessions this week! Is everyone enjoying the summer holidays?
Why I don't have (What ?)!!!! I hope that you don't forget to practice~~~
Recently I made several new friends, all of them are kind and patient. I like talking to everyone.
I found that I merely forgot the french and that I am a little nervous when I speak it. I am too lazy to practice and I regret that I don't find the time for practice.
I have also delayed my fiction creation for 2 months because of my laziness. I need to be supervisored !!!
I will change my bad personality trait and continue working much harder :P
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