for an online application

please, correct :-(

Dear Sir or Madam,

I'm writing this email/letter because I'd like to apply for the internship that starts on 1st January 2015.

I see that the application deadline is the end of August 2014, but I won't graduate until the 1st of October 2014. Could I still be considered as a candidate for this position?

Yours faithfully,

Don't forget that the first person direct pronoun (I, I'd, I'm, I've) is ALWAYS capitalised in English.

Good luck...I hope you get the job!

for an online application

please, correct :-(

Good evening, I'm writing this mail to you because I'd like to applying for the traineeship (internship?) that will starts on 1 January 2015. I have a question: I will graduate only on the 1st of October 2014, but as i know I see that the deadline to apply is at the end of August 2014. Is anyway admissible my candidation it possible that I could still be considered as a candidate?