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Fictional Story. Maria’s First Day at Work Maria was very excited because she was going to start her first day at work. She hasn’t had the easiest time to get a job and she felt very nervous because it was a good opportunity to prove her worth. She was in charge of the spare parts management in a big warehouse which supply mechanical workshops for cars. She had to report the needs of their customers and get in touch with the component manufactures. It was a big responsibility because each mistake meant loss of money to the company and customer dissatisfaction. To complicate an already difficult situation further, she had to deal with her boss in English because he didn’t speak a single word in Spanish. At 8:00 a.m. she was in the entrance of the building. Her boss, named John, was waiting for her in his office located on the top of the edifice. - Welcome to our company, Maria. I would like to introduce you to Braulio. He is going to show you the ropes- said her boss. Maria was very excited because she knew that English idiom. That meant Braulio was going to teach her how to do the tasks. - Pleased to meet you Braulio, I am looking forward to starting- Maria said. - Pleased to meet you too, Maria. In first instance I am going to show you the warehouse layout and introduce you your new colleagues. Please feel free to ask me if you have any doubt. It doesn’t matter how many times you need, I will repeat it until you catch it, ok?-Braulio said to her and took her to downstairs because she needed to change their shoes for ones boots with steel toe caps. After she changed their shoes, she was ready to visit the warehouse floor. Braulio explained to Maria that the layout of the first floor was divided by three parts: unload area, storage and load area. Lorries arrived to the entrance gate and unload the parcels of components. Each kind of component was placed in its corresponding box within big shelves which reached the ceiling. In case a component was required, each box had a reference number to locate it. In the load area, there was another gate for the lorries which supplied to the mechanical workshops. Maria seemed amazed and she couldn’t help having a big smile in her face. In spite of the warehouse looked very old and archaic, she knew how to take advantage of its high-potential. To be continued...

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Fictional Story. Maria’s First Day at Work

Maria was very excited because she was going to start her first day at work. She hasn’t had didn't have the easiest time to get getting a job and she felt very nervous because it was a good opportunity to prove her worth.

She was in charge of the spare parts management in a big warehouse which that supply supplies mechanical workshops for cars parts to car mechanics. She had to report the needs of their customers and get in touch with the component manufacturers. It was a big responsibility because each mistake meant loss of lost money to the company and customer dissatisfaction.
To further complicate an already difficult situation further, she had to deal with her boss in English because he didn’t speak a single word in Spanish.

At 8:00 a.m. she was in the entrance of the building. Her boss, named John, was waiting for her in his office located on the top floor of the edifice.

- Welcome to our company, Maria. I would like to introduce you to Braulio. He is going to show you the ropes- said her boss.

Maria was very excited because she knew that English idiom. That meant Braulio was going to teach her how to do the tasks.

- Pleased to meet you Braulio, I am looking forward to starting- Maria said.
- Pleased to meet you too, Maria. In first instance First I am going to show you the warehouse layout and introduce you to your new colleagues. Please feel free to ask me if you have any doubt questions. It doesn’t matter how many times you need, I will repeat it until you catch it on, ok?-Braulio said to her and took her to downstairs because she needed to change their her shoes for ones boots with steel toe caps.

After she changed their shoes, she was ready to visit the warehouse floor. Braulio explained to Maria that the layout of the first floor was divided by into three parts: unloading area, storage and loading area. Lorries arrived to at the entrance gate and unloaded the parcels of components. Each kind of component was placed in its corresponding box within big shelves which reached to the ceiling. In case a component was required, each box had a reference number to locate it. In the loading area, there was another gate for the lorries that supplied delivered the parts to the mechanical workshops mechanics.

Maria seemed amazed and she couldn’t help having a big smile in her face. In spite of the warehouse looked looking very old and archaic, she knew how to take advantage of its high-potential.

To be continued...

 

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Fictional Story. Maria’s First Day at Work

Maria was very excited because she was going to start her first day at work. She (better) didn't have the easiest time finding a job and she felt very nervous because it was a good opportunity to prove her worth.

She was in charge of the spare parts management in a big warehouse which supply mechanical workshops??? mechanical parts?? for cars. She had to report the needs of their customers and get in touch with the component manufactures. It was a big responsibility because each mistake meant loss of money to the company and customer dissatisfaction.
To complicate an already difficult situation further, she had to deal with her boss in English because he didn’t speak a single word in Spanish.

At 8:00 a.m. she was in the entrance of the building. Her boss, named John, was waiting for her in his office located on the top of the edifice.

- Welcome to our company, Maria. I would like to introduce you to Braulio. He is going to show you the ropes- said her boss.

Maria was very excited because she knew that English idiom. That meant Braulio was going to teach her how to do the tasks.

- Pleased to meet you Braulio, I am looking forward to starting- Maria said.
- Pleased to meet you too, Maria. In first instance I am going to show you the warehouse layout and introduce you your new colleagues. Please feel free to ask me if you have any doubt(better: questions). It doesn’t matter how many times you need to ask, I will repeat it until you catch it, ok?-Braulio said to her and took her to downstairs because she needed to change her shoes for ones boots with steel toe caps.

After she changed her shoes, she was ready to visit the warehouse floor. Braulio explained to Maria that the layout of the first floor was divided by three parts: unload area, storage and load area. Lorries arrived at the entrance gate and unloaded the parcels of components. Each kind of component was placed in its corresponding box within big shelves which reached the ceiling. In case a component was required  ???, each box had a reference number to locate it. In the load area, there was another gate for the lorries which supplied to the mechanical workshops.

Maria seemed amazed and she couldn’t help having a big smile in her face. In spite of the warehouse looked very old and archaic, she knew how to take advantage of its high-potential.

To be continued...

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Your English is very good. You already have your essay very well corrected and really there is nothing that I could add so I will look out for part 2 of the story. Kind regards

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