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The place more incredible where I have been. Three weeks ago, I was visiting to cliffs of Moher. These cliffs are in Ireland and are the most big from Europe. I had been in other cliffs from Canary Islands before, but I think that Cliffs of Moher are more awesome than Cliffs of Canary Islands. When I saw this place, I remained fascinated. It was better than in the pictures. My friends and I began to walking about them. We got to arrive until penultimate cliff. Since above, all was seen very small. Even the boats! Some people chose to take a boat for see the cliffs. We were careful, when we were near the shore because the guide said us that much people had died there. There was a castle where you could see better the landscape, but we should to pay three euros for climb there. We thought that it was a scam, we decided not enter. In Ireland all is very expensive! Then, we went to see a café in mountain. It was original. I hadn't seen a local inside a mountain before. When, I came back to Dublin, I bought postcards of Cliffs of Moher and now, I can see this wonderful place every day since my room.

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The most place more incredible  place where I have been to.

Three weeks ago, I was visited visiting the to cliffs of Moher.
These cliffs are located in Ireland and are the biggest most big from in Europe. I've had been in other cliffs from Canary Islands before, but I think that cliffs of Moher are more awesome than cliffs of from Canary Islands.
When I saw this place, I was remained fascinated!. It was better than in the pictures.
My friends and I walked began to walking about them and only stopped when we got to  the arrive until penultimate cliff.
Since From above everything seemed all was seen very small, even the boats! Some people even chose to take a boat to for see the cliffs.
We were careful, when we were neared the shore because the guide told said us that  many much people had died there.
There was also a castle where you could see the landscape better the landscape, but we wouldn't should to pay three euros to for climb there. We thought that it was a scam,  and we decided not enter. In Ireland everything all is very expensive!
Then, we went to see a café in the  mountain, it was very original! I hadn't seen a café localed inside a mountain before.
When, I came back to Dublin, I bought back postcards of  the cliffs of Moher and now I can see this wonderful place every day in since my room.

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I was in Dublin an year ago. I falled in love with that fantastic city!!

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