[Writing Feedback] [IELTS Task 1] US Energy Consumption Hope you guys can help me to check this out ! If something are weird about grammar, structure, vocabulary...or any thing. Please let me know. I also attach the graph picture. Hope it can help. ---------------------------------------------------- The line graph shows changes in the energy consumption of six different forms of fuel in The United States between 1980 and 2030. It is noticeable that petrol and oil group is by far the most popular types of fuel for US energy throughout 50-year period. Also, while the amount of energy consumption by coal, petrol and oil increase gradually, the figures for nuclear and solar energy rise marginally. Between 1980 and 2005, US petrol and oil consumption rose from exactly 35 quadrillion (q) units to a high of 40q units, the figures for both coal and natural gas also rose and remain around 15q units.lower, at from 16q units to 20q units respective ly to the same amount of 22q units. During the same period, the amount of energy consumption of nuclear, solar and hydro-power were slightly fluctuated between 4q and 7q units which were consistently lower than the figures for the rest of fossil fuel used by Americans. By 2030, the consumption of energy from petrol and oil is expected to reach almost 50q units, and the amount of energy consumption of coal and gas are also predicted to rise, at nearly 30q and 24q units respectively. By contrast, there is predicted to be no significant changes in the trends for nuclear, solar, and hydro-power energy consumption which are by far the three least common fossil fuels in The US. ------------------------------------- THANK YOU SO MUCH!